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As I was reading, I couldn't help thinking about the Epstein files and the uncomfortable questions they raised about power, influence, and what institutions choose to protect. What I loved here is that you turned those themes into something much larger and more unsettling. The technology may be fictional, but the dynamics felt disturbingly familiar. You should publish more often. I always enjoy reading your work.

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Yes! Finally! Well worth the wait!

Amazing, just amazing! So different from your earlier pieces but also quite familiar. The way you wrote about the three different clients really made each one stand out. Paul was lonely, I felt sorry for him. William was an asshole, I hated him. Jay was a toss between, he was lonely but also kind of a jerk. And the heroine! You managed to make her vulnerable but strong, quiet but intelligent, practical but compassionate. It took me awhile to read because I was savouring all the details and turns of the story, almost like eating a really delicious slice of cake. I wanted to make it last. Thank you so much for letting me read. I enjoyed it a lot.

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